Should I Wright Poems?

I've just written "Pitch Black Hope" and I was wondering if I should continue writing my free verse pomes? Also check out my newest free verse poem called "Pitch Black Hope." Please comment on it.

EDIT: Here's the link to the newest poem I made. It's called "Pitch Black Hope." Just to give you a bit of a warning before reading it that it's kind of dark. spyroconvexity.deviantart.com/…